A lost world

trilingual text: english, italian and romanian

This morning I wanted with all my heart
to do something good for someone
I went out on the streets: nor an old man, no man homeless
No lost child or kitten stuck in the tree
only new vehicles running in an orderly manner at high speed and
the robots that entering at the gates of the institutions
I started to cry, but a tear from the eyes has came out metallized…

a2Un mondo perso
Stamattina ho voluto con tutto il cuore
di fare qualcosa di buono per qualcuno
Sono uscito in strada: nessun vecchio, nessun uomo senza tetto
Nessun bambino smarrito o gattino bloccato nell’albero
soltanto veicoli nuove che circolano in maniera ordinata ad alta velocità e
dei robot entrando per le porte delle istituzioni
Ho iniziato a piangere, ma dagli occhi usci una lacrima metallica…

The Edge of a Lost WorldLumea pierdută
În această dimineață am vrut din toată inima
Să fac un bine cuiva
Am ieșit în stradă: niciun bătrân, niciun om fără adăpost
Niciun copil rătăcit sau pisică blocată în copaci
Doar mașini noi rulând ordonate în viteze foarte mari
și roboți intrând pe porțile instituțiilor
Am dat să plâng, dar din ochi se ivi o lacrimă metalică….

48 thoughts on “A lost world

  1. Interesting idea of the metallic tear…

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  2. am dat să plâng, să-mi fac un bine mie… dar din ochi se ivi o lacrimă metalică… nici eu nu eram😀
    fain!

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  3. In aceasta dimineata ai indreptat privirea in directia nepotrivita. ..
    Ai ales sa vezi metalicul societatii moderne..
    Stii. .. masinile sunt conduse, inca, de oameni. ..
    Pe ei i-ai vazut?
    Garantat nici ei nu te-au vazut, modernismul ne transforma in roboti. ..

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    • m-am ciocnit pe strada de oameni…. scuzele reciproce erau metalice, ochii metalici, traim intr-o lume semi-vie?

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      • daca in urma ciocnirilor tale au rezultat clink-uri metalice… lumea pare semi-vie…
        la randu-mi…
        azi m-am ciocnit de oameni pe strada.. si am simtit caldura zambetelor….
        sunt zile cand ma lovesc de oameni pe strada si simt cum ma sparg in milioane de bucati inghetate…
        dar…. niciodata cand ma lovesc de oameni, nu doresc sa aud clinketul metalic …
        atunci cand voi auzi clinketul de metal, voi deveni la randu-mi o semi-moarta ..

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  4. Great art you write, great!

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  5. I like your style, thank you for sharing.🙂

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  6. Thanks for sharing!

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  7. so true. lot to learn from your blog.

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  8. Nu mă aşteptam la acest final🙂 . Interesantă ideea. Felicitări!

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  9. In some ways better, in other ways worse, but always different. Nice work.

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  10. You were lo9king for somebody to help and maybe he needed a hug.

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  11. Simple but mind blowing… Thanks, for writing something like this.

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  12. lacrima metallica…
    Impressive, though I am not too sure what it is meant to convey really.
    Thanks for dropping by my post. Do please comment when you return.

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  13. You seem to have very great depth in your heart…Thank you for reading my posts..It means much to me Heart to heart Robyn

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  14. WOW is what comes to mind . . . food for thought . . . bless you!

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  15. This is a lovely poem. Well done!

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  16. It’s a nice poem.

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  17. Reblogged this on leapfrog.

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  18. Valeriu. Thank you for your visit. Sorry my response was delayed due to network challenge as of the time. Just trying to decongestt my box to realise that i had some mail unattended to. Great site you have here. Rgds

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  19. viktoryarch

    Reblogged this on Vik Tory Arch and commented:
    Beautiful

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  20. Hi Valeriu, thanks for liking my post. You are an incredibly talented writer and have an amazing site here.

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  21. Very well described. Hope those days never come.

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  22. Hi, and thank you for visiting my blog ‘teleportingweena’ and for liking the post about bananas! Much appreciated!

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  23. This is a great piece. It resonates around a metropolitan disorder.

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