People and mice, remake – forgive me dear John S. / uomini e topi, travisamento – mi perdoni caro John S. / oameni şi şoareci, răstălmăcire – iartă-mă dragă John S.

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Too many comas between us, see, we don’t dance, we just stand there, still
Like in old, faded photographs
Too many truces
Emptied of Self, we are expecting without expectations the imminent second
The unique major gesture, the click of the mouse until
The click turns into a planet with the hand on the mouse
The virtualintelectualpsychomasturbation
Until we have the conviction that the mouse had grown on us like an 11th finger
– your finger kisses my finger
We don’t, really not…

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troppe virgole tra noi, vedi, non balliamo, stiamo cosi tranquilli
come nelle foto diventate marrone
troppe tregue
svuotati di sé, aspettiamo senza attese il secondo imminente
l’unico gran gesto è un click del mouse fino a quando
diventeremo un pianeta con la mano sul mouse
psicomasturbazionismointellettualizzato
fino a quando possediamo la convinzione che il mouse è cresciuto come un undicesimo dito
– Il tuo dito bacia il mio dito
noi no, troppo …no

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prea multe virgule-ntre noi, vezi, nu dansăm, stăm aşa cuminţi
ca-n poze înmaronite
prea multe armistiţii
goi de sine aşteptăm fără aşteptări secunda iminentă
unicul gest major, click-ul mouse-ului până ce
devine o planetă cu mâna pe mouse
psihomasturbaţionismintelectovirtualnic
până ce posedăm convingerea că mouse-ul ne-a crescut ca un al 11 lea deget
– degetul tău se pupă cu degetul meu
noi nu, prea nu

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35 thoughts on “People and mice, remake – forgive me dear John S. / uomini e topi, travisamento – mi perdoni caro John S. / oameni şi şoareci, răstălmăcire – iartă-mă dragă John S.

  1. That’s an awesome poem my friend, I like it🙂 Thanks for sharing!

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  2. mouse has been born into a smart boy he could connect two hearts even obstructed distance timed–thank for follow me

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  3. OMG!! This one is so cool. The whole psycomasturbation thing is intriguing!
    Love love the photos you picked for this post. Hugs to you…Paula xx

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  6. FOBII??!!! OBSESII!? sau minti lucide??!!!

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  7. La declinazione del surrelismo nell’ermetismo rendono l’oggetto poetico quella cosa scevra d’ogni cosa e si volge all’animo e non alla mente che legata a mode e schemi trova turbamento ma ne resta attratta e respinta dalla vertigine dalla desueta prospettiva cosi come Luna e Terra.

    Alessio

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  8. Very nice! kind of scary too! Love it!

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  9. Interesting poem on a timely topic with a twist.

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  10. Wowsers. Very brave.

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  11. Great words and outstanding visuals! Thank you!

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  12. Hi Valeriu, thanks so much for coming by the blog. I must say, your blog is pretty amazing – I can’t think of anyone else I’ve heard of who can write poems which work in three languages at this frequency. Keep up the good work!

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    • a greeting for you from eternal Rome. – merit is not mine, I write in Romanian, always I try to tradure in Italian, but for English I have a great friend from America who helps me
      thanks, we follow

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  13. “Virtualintelectualpsychomasturbation”. I think a whole poem could be made by this word only.

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  14. “The click turns into a planet with the hand on the mouse”: that is how I feel oftentimes when I enter the blogosphere, like I’ve just landed on another planet🙂

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